Much improved.
Altough some of the parts were still as cheesy as the first one, some of the jokes were better. And the "Fuck you, Toad" Part at the end was really what tied it all together. In short, Not perfect, but who is? Not me, especially since I just got flash and am still working on an animation. Which, by the way, I should get to work on. As soon as I view some other animations. King is owt.